If we act together to start a revolution
We might just come across a solution...
To some of the world's problems that we all need to cure
That is, if you think you are ready to endure
For Madonna alone can only inspire us to act
But we can band together to start a revolution if we all create a pact
To work together and achieve a goal
With Madonna in a postion to be a model for our role
We showed the world how we could come together in peace through music and song
We did it with Live Aid and Live 8.....how can we go wrong?
We just need to keep to the dream and don't hesitate
When the time is right we must not wait
We can band together and cure one problem at a time
Can you get the meaning in my message....can you see the consciousness in my rhyme
If we act together to start a revoultion....it must be for more then just one day
It must mean leaving egos at the door if the soultion is to stay
So continue to inspire us Madonna with your words, your songs, your beliefs and your shows
And together we can start a revolution and watch it as it grows

Daniel

very nice babe...xxxxxxxxxxx

I'm eating Scooby Doo Berry Bones cereal right now...maybe later.

If Madonna really wants us to start a revolution with her how do you suggest we help her begin....speaking seriously of course....

Daniel

A revolution to start a change....
Must take more then actions that seem deranged
We must speak in terms of what is true
To inspire the masses like me and you
So if you are one who seeks truth, justice and the American life
Then let's treat each other like husband and wife
A relationship that will stand the test of time
Can you follow my meaning...can you see it through time?
For true love will last a lifetime of pleasure
So get on board and lets find the treasure
The treasure of love lies deep in my heart
I just need your help to let this feeling start
For love starts from the heart and rises to the soul
Let's all begin to prosper as we live out our role
Our role in life that comes with age
We must cast out our anger, our hatred and rage
And maybe, just maybe, we all can view life on the very same page!

Madonna has changed the world....this much may be true
For she has opened up new ways of thinking for me and you
She has made it fine to attain another state of mind
She has given us style and broken down barriers to how we view sex
So what's next?
She takes on the establishment and goes her own way
Her music is here to stay
We dance and shout to her new musical beat
She brings about a feeling of heat
Deep in our soul, we leave our confessions on the dancefloor
Longing for more
We want to express ourselves in new and exotic ways
Will the influence of Madonna continue to stay?
Lets help her change the world as she sings about love
She may lead us all to heaven above
In her Kaballah she takes us to a new way of thought and being
Can you follow the dream I keep seeing?
There is still a ways to go before we will know
But for a girl who once said she wanted to rule the world
She has indeed made us see that this may truly be the way to change the world but we must now act as one
As we listen to her music and still have some fun
So lets help Madonna change the world in a magical way
And maybe we can learn to change the world each and every day

Daniel

To keep this thread alive with a meaning and a cause...
We must not pause
There is a movement that is yet undercover
You may soon all discover
That if we are to change the world and start with love
We all must be able to feel the desire and take it above
Madonna may have started the revolution but its up to you and me
Can't you see
We must join together like it was done in the past
Don't laugh at what I say or the movement will never last
If it takes a new way of thinking...I'll supply the words
Let us all act together as one or the message will never be heard
Think of the Kennedys, John Lennon and Dr. King
Their words are alive in my soul....their freedom bell must ring
And with Madonna's help.... we all have learned to sing
So lets continue to change the world for better and not worse
And I will continue to supply you with verse after verse
If you give me a chance to step into Madonna's world and stand by her side
Then my words may take on more meaning as our eyes are opened wide
For one can use fame to spread greed or make love
And to change the world together we must view the world from above
Universal love....its all around
Let's all spread this gift to man from every city and every town
And if all can astound and marvel at the scene
We can start a movement together with Madonna as our queen!

Daniel

To reach out to the world we must show the people we care
We must touch their hearts with a feeling that we all seem to share
We can sing and dance and make romance
But we must be true to ourselves that how we act...
Will create a pact
With the young and the old...we must bring together the people who still believe in the dream
No need to lie and scheme
We can start with love and carry this feeling to space above
There is still time to rediscover the New Fronteir
We may have stumbled but that magical time may once again be here
We just have to believe in the power of faith, justice and truth
And the future of our skies may once again belong to our youth!

Daniel

very good ...and i am in

Is there anyone else out there who reads my poetry and listens to Madonna who want to join this revolution?


It often takes the written word
If a revolution is to be heard
But when Madonna sings
THe revolution bell rings
So climb on board as we all set sail for a brighter day
And I'll continue with my poetry to come your way


Daniel

These words I write to inspire the Queen
From within my soul they spring forth a love that is seldom seen
Can you help me with my task?
Can you make these feelings last?
If Madonna needs a friend....one that will never end
All she need do is give me a way
To write these words for her people...for an audience that will stay
And bring them home to the world day after day
It often takes emotions that are seldom heard
To inspire mankind with the written word
But when one voice alone cries out in the night
It often takes many voices to get the words right
So here I sit calling out to those who would listen to what my soul has to say
Will you help us change the world
If I call out to you day after day

Daniel

If you would allow me to use this thread to bring meaning to the cause for peace and love
I will take you soaring into deep space above
There comes a time when we all must heed a call
No matter how big....no matter how small
I can only hope to inspire your heart
To allow my words to give us a new start
I may not be famous as of yet
But there are others in the world I bet
Who have become famous and are living the dream
If you see them up close you may even see their eyes beam
For they have found the light of love that we all search for
They have become idols to many....the rich and the poor
These are the people I now reach out to touch
For they can change the world with their voices...they can show us so much
If Madonna is one of these people who has power and fame
She can help lead the cause without ridicule and shame
For she has earned the right to be called an Icon to us all
Let's hope that she can continue to inspire the masses....as some of us rise and some of us fall.


Daniel

She sings with compassion, ecstasy, and truth
She was once idolized by America's youth
Now she has grown older and become a mother and wife
Can't you hear the passion in American Life?
She sets her goals and breaks new ground
Can't you hear her music.....its all around

Look back thru time and you can hear her rhyme
From Love Profusion to Borderline
She changes as much as time itself
She can re-invent the future before it happens
Now she seeks the answers that were denied in her youth
She looks for the religion that will give her the truth

If she follows my rhyme she may find peace of mind
For the Queen of Pop has learned how to rock
She crosses barriers and breaks down the walls
Where others follow.....she follows her call
Walk tall, Madonna....continue to show others the way
Your words will always have meaning....for they will always stay
Deep in our hearts
For this is where you have given us our starts

Daniel

Inorder to start a revolution there must be a need for change
Not just words that are thrown around in a mind that is deranged
There must be a need to right what is wrong
This can be done through the poetry in a song
When Madonna adds music to a story
The poetry comes alive in all its glory
So let's act together to find a truth
A deeper meaning that appeals to our youth
For if the young can find a meaning to change
Then a social revolution will not seem that strange
But we must have more then Madonna on our side
We need the help of the famous to give us pride
For when we stand together as one
It is then that our revolution will be won
We must get over this fame that is yielding greed
It is then we can truly grow the flowers that will come from our seeds
When the seeds have been planted in our youth
It is then we will see the power of our truth!


Daniel

That's cute Daniel

Thanks for the great pictoral of our queen........now more poetry to keep this revolution moving


Another day passes in our sheltered everyday lives
For those of us who are single, husbands or wives
We reach out for an answer to life's daily struggles and watch our TV's
But what do we see?
We see anger and hate, greed and rape
Where do we go when we want to escape?
We try hiding in the music, but we find it there too
What is a honest man to do?
We can listen to Madonna and feel her dance beat
We can head out to the clubs and dance on our feet
If for just one night....her music could make it all right
But if we really want to start a revolution with Madonna as our queen
We must attract a following that the world has not seen
For change comes in measures and measures come in time
Maybe we can start this revolution if she believes in my rhyme

Daniel

LOVE IT!!!!!

I BELIEVE I BELIEVE! ! !

very sweet and cute romeoICON:)

Love it

Is everybody in?
THe ceremony is about to begin
Gather round...all who believe that this revolution will take place
Welcome to my poetic world trapped within this rat race
To all who believe that love will change our world
Enter my thread and don't be brain dead
Speak your mind on my poetry or any Madonna song
And the revolution can't go wrong
I know Madonna will keep singing and I'll keep writing to let her know
That we all intend to be a part of her show
For she makes us dance and makes us think
Watch it now...you mustn't blink
Or you will miss the revolution that is about to begin
Is Everybody in?


Daniel

There comes a time when the famous must give in and react to their fans
If they truly want to start a revolution and take a stand
They often lose touch of what is real
Because their agent is too busy making another deal
To add more wealth to their multimillion dollar lives
Can true love survive?
In a world where money and greed can steal an artists soul
How do they know what God has in store for them....who will choose their next role?
It takes a woman of conscious like Madonna to break through the walls
To reach out to the masses...both large and small
Do you think she reads what I have to say
Each and every day
I try to ignite a spark and make you think
Of better times to come for one and all
For it is her poetic soul that has made me feel tall
Knowing that if we all work together we just might be able to change the world
With music and song and words that last
I will give meaning to her future as she has inspired me with her past
So let's all start this revoultion with words from a poet's heart
And maybe Esther will let Madonna be a part!

Daniel

Can you feel the desire that Madonna can inspire?
Can you feel the heat when you dance to her beat?
Can you feel the sweat ?
Does she make you wet?
She has the power to open your eyes and mind
With her music and her life
She inspires both husband and wife
She can inspire the children to express themselves in many ways
When she dresses her way the girls will follow her fashion that is usually here to stay
When she dresses to kill the boys find it hard to keep their free will
She makes us see that sex can be found in many places
You can see it on the faces
When a woman like this has enough free will to make us understand
That our religion may be spread from woman to man
It makes us be who we are.....then rise above
Madonna may lead us all to love
A love that means enough to say that what you feel is right
Express yourself and you will find the inner light!

Daniel

Madonna says she wants to start a revolution
Let's start with evolution
But when we reach the ultimate solution
It may be time to pray
Because sometimes faith is all we have
It's all we need
But we must cast out our greed
And look at the stars for faith and support of our goals
Not keeping us down in secondary roles
If a person has talent
Support them as they try to change their world
Help them break through the walls as they cry out for help
This is where I find myself to be
Won't you please reach out and help me......

If I had the chance to show the world my point of view
I would open the doors to artists like me and you
Sometimes it's hard to keep alive my dream
But I continue the fight to see your eyes beam
The light of love is always here to stay
The light of love can show us the way
But when poets and dreamers travel within
Search their hearts and try to begin...
They often come across those who would keep them down
And not give us a chance to show our gifts to the world for all to astound
It's a fame game
With the establishment to blame
So hear my words and let me in
And we may just be able to change the world....can that be a sin?


Daniel

If our revolution is about to begin....
We must all join the fight and learn how to win
Soon my words will be read in a book for all to see
Then maybe this revolution will come to be
I hope you enjoy reading my words and listening to the words as I continue to post
But we need to inspire the masses... of this I cannot boast
So if you are one who takes my words to heart
Then you may be one who has a part
In Madonna's revolution
Let's all be a part of the solution

Daniel

Its time for another poem with conscious and rhyme
If Madonna really wants to start a revolution...
She must see that her fans are really a part of the solution
We follow her life and take meaning through her art
How will this revolution start?
She must offer us some hope that there is a better world out there to see
A place in her heart for you and for me
Change comes to those who believe that we must right the wrongs
We hear it in the artists words....what they say in their songs
So if you can believe in my words and what I have to say
You will see that I reach out for love each and every day
But I find that I receive little in return....but that’s ok
I'll continue to write here in Madonna's forum...spreading my words of love and peace
And we might just find that a new revolution is growing even as my words may cease
So please dear Esther, continue to write and sing
For your words continue to inspire us with the happiness that they bring.

It seems I must keep this thread alive
If we are to become fruitful and wise
I wonder if Madonna reads any of what I write
What must I do to get it right?
I believe in the power of the written word
And some of these poems will be in my book so that they can be heard
But until the time when I can get into the public eye
I will continue to write a verse or two
To inspire me as well as you

Daniel

beautiful..we see the same....Im in!

Dreamers of the world and Iconers around the globe.....come join me in my quest...if you follow my words then I'll do the rest.


This poem will be included in my new book:


WHEN DREAMERS BECOME DOERS


Dreamers of the world…….lets unite with a guiding light!
For when dreamers become doers and doers become leaders,
Then all will follow the voice of justice and truth
All will see how wonderful it can be….to feel totally free.

When children grow to become lovers and lovers become friends….
Then this world we live in will never have an end.
When all see the light in all of it’s might,
The glow will surround her face and give us our place
When all can see the truth and feel the desire,
Then all will feel the joy that love can inspire…
It inspires our hearts, our souls and our mind,
It leads us to the Promised Land….
It leads us out of time

When true love and happiness are sustained in all….
It is then that the inner voice of God will speak in the hall
When every nation turns and looks within to find the truth,
It is then that they will see the wisdom and the power of our youth.
The youth of the world are the future of the skies
They tell us so much, they will lead us to try.
So try to become like children in heart and in mind
Then this feeling of love will carry us through time.
It will carry us above the mountains, the rivers and the seas
It will show all who believe how wonderful life can be.

Yes, this feeling of love turns us into a child
It tames our hearts that were once careless and wild.
So when dreamers become doers and doers become leaders….
And when children grow to become lovers….
And lovers become friends…
Then the feelings will be real and the broken hearts will heal
And when the hearts are healed and the light shines through,
She becomes he and he becomes you
For the feeling of love will become timeless and true.

It will carry us back to the Moon; beyond and above
It will take us to the heavens
It will carry us to Love.


Daniel

Here's another poem from my new book:


THE FAME GAME

We live in a world where fame brings legions of fans….
But how do we determine which are helping hands?
Some reach out, others reach in….
Most will support the artist, no matter their sin….
It is up to the artist to use their fame….
But it is often the choices that they make that make their fame a heartache game….
The fans will follow but the artist must lead….
In a society where fame yields greed,
The artist must first plant the flower and the seed if their reputation is to succeed.


Daniel
May 2004

I see that more words are due
To help inspire Madonna as well as me and you
With her songs she fills a place in our hearts
But will these words be enough to give us our starts?
We all must be able to comprehend this thing called love
It's more then a feeling and seems to come from above
I can write of love in this forum but I fear my words may be lost
But at what cost?
Poetry is just a song without music to sing
It often floats in our minds like a bird that spreads its wings
But it comes alive when Madonna sings her tune
It can fill your senses as you enter a room
So please help me make my words last
And I'll try to give meaning to our past
When people with a vision were given a chance to change their world for the better
And we all sang the same tunes as we tried to come together

Will you come together if you hear me speak
THese words are meant for the strong as well as the weak
What do you say
Will a new revolution come our way?
It will if you truly believe
I am not trying to decieve
But when love comes calling you must answer it's door
Or it will leave and won't come round anymore
What do you say
Will a new revolution come our way?

Daniel

Can you still recall the social revolution of Martin Luther King?
If Dr King's legacy is to be more then just one day...
We all must remember the struggle we overcame in a peaceful protest way
The youth of today may not remember the fight
But for some of us it remains in our sight
So on his holiday and all throughout the year, be with your family and remember his cause
Take time to listen but let us not pause
We must continue to demand equal rights wherever injustice grows deep
Or the roots of human cruelty will again in our lives seep
So let us praise Dr King for taking a stand
And maybe modern day society will see the true greatness of the man.

Daniel

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Here’s another poem to keep you enlightened
Don’t be afraid, my words are not meant to make you frightened
When I write these words they come from my heart
To give you and your fans the faith to achieve another start

I truly believe in this woman that we have all come to know
For she often speaks her mind to give us a show
Where once she was viewed as a bad influence on our children….
Now she gives back by writing for the children in a fairytale story
And she has forsaken the limelight, the fame and the glory
To pass on a moral or two
For our children and also for you

She has already gained power in this world as the years have gone by
Now she seeks the answers through Kaballah that will tell her why
Why are we here and where are we going?
Maybe these answers are within herself and the glow that she’s been showing

So keep to your faith, dear Esther, and draw from within
And this faith that you follow will help you begin
To begin to see your inner light
And continue to reach out to those who are reaching in with a deeper sight
So keep to your faith through every day and into the night
And I’ll keep to mine
And give back what I can through my poetry and rhyme.


Daniel



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I now write from me to you
To the many who read because they are sad and feel blue
With Madonna's songs we can escape to another world
Deep inside the feelings reside
She makes us dance and feel free to love
For some she makes us question the stars above
To look up in the sky and question why?
Is there a deeper love you are thinking of?
Does love exist in another land...another place
Another body....another face
Now I write for my love to come calling
For I feel that in her love I am falling
So sing to us Esther and dream if you may
For I will be there to listen when your tour comes my way
And I will dream of her beauty day after day

BEGIN AGAIN WE MUST

For in the beginning there was chaos, confusion and exhilaration
Yet in the transformation there is a new star
In the distance, in the horizon
Over water…seas that wave for expression
Oceans that wander to the edge of tomorrow
Here lies the beginning…if not the end
For begin again we must

To see the land, the color of the eyes, the lights and the perception
Begin again we must
To behold the rally, to marvel at the scene
To relive the movie, to watch the magic appear on the screen
Here lies the beginning…Here lies the end
To begin in the future
Yet, to know why and when

Begin again we must
For, you see, to begin is to start
And to start is to relive
Yet, to begin again we must
We must begin again to give….

This revolution that we must start each day
Means more then just talk if it is to come our way
We see Madonna in concert and take in the show
But does Madonna alone really know which way to go?
When she reinvents herself....she does so with song and fashion
But it is up to us to feel her passion
If her passion for her cause strikes a place in your heart
Then she will have given us a new place to start
So get on board and offer a solution
And we just might set sail on an historic revolution!

Daniel

As Madonna takes her revolution on the road
It must be more then a concert if she is to carry the load
She can sing and dance and make us think
But you mustn't blink
Or you will miss the chance to see a revolution unfold before your eyes
For Madonna brings a new revolution to the stage each time...on every tour
She has us calling out for more
So dance in your seat and explore the new Madonna beat
For she takes us to new places in our minds and on the stage
Her music is meant to make you dance not speak out in rage
Yes Madonna continues to take her revoltion to every town and city
And if you can't comprehend her meaning then thats just a pity!

Daniel

Find love on her tour
Hold her hand as she asks for more
Listen to Madonna and watch her strike a pose
Don't turn up your nose
For a new revolution is about to begin
Just watch Madge sing and dance all night
And everything in the world will be all right
If only for one night don't let her out of your sight

In 1776 America celebrated Independence from British rule to be free
And every year we celebrate what that revolution meant to you and me
If there is to be a revolution.. the people must fight for the cause
There is no time to hesitate and pause
For the people know in their hearts that freedom must be achieved
There is no time to be timid or decieved
We will fight to the end because it is a message that we must send
To those who would hold us down and take away our human rights
We fight with freedom in our sights
So as we celebrate on the 4th of July...
We know in our hearts that independence must not pass us by
It is a human right that makes each day a delight
So as Madonna sings and dances on the stage each night...
Let's be thankful for the right to express who we are
In a country where it is possible for the common man to become a star!

We must fight for our revolution to take place
A fight in the minds to achieve a greater space
One where dreams can come true for me and you
A revolution of the mind....sometimes take time
But if you know what must be done
The revolution can be won
Like in our past...when freedom had a cause
We must fight for our human rights and never stop or pause
For the dignity of man must survive the fight
And it will if the revolution is right!

Daniel

As Madonna prances on the stage each night
She dances up a storm to make us all feel right
But she also speaks with a concious...and makes us think
There's more to this woman then just being pretty in pink
She is not afraid to take up a cause and start a revolution
And she will be the first to offer up a solution
SO if you go to see her show
Take with you an open mind as to what you might see
As the queen of pop opens her mind...to enlighten both you and me!

Daniel

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